Sunday, January 30, 2011

SIX SENTENCE SUNDAY 4...




Thank you to everyone who stops by to read my SIX!  I'm having a ball with this.  Your comments are encouraging!  This set of Six is from my current wip, Dating Impossible...Meet Dr. Cruz Avery, delectable twin brother of firefighter, Jett Avery....

“God damn it!” A female voice exclaimed, stopping Dr. Cruz Avery mid-step. He stood by the partially open door in the back hall of Our Lady Of Sorrow Catholic Church.



Intrigued by a woman who would use the Lord’s name in vain, given her current surroundings, he leaned closer to the crack in the door. And here, Cruz thought, his brother’s wedding would be an occasion he’d have to suffer through. By all indications, things might be on this side of interesting.



There's the tease...we will be seeing more from this hunky ER doctor later... We will get back to Cruz and JJ in upcoming SSS posts... By the time this posts, I will be in bed, sleeping because I work night shifts at the hospital.  Can't wait to check out these other Six Sentence Authors for more fun snippets later tonight when I get up!  For those of you up, don't wait!  Here is the link:  www.sixsentence.blogspot.com/

Enjoy your Sunday!
Kathleen



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23 comments:

  1. Jayel KayeJanuary 30, 2011 at 7:11 AM

    The girl's got spunk! Great six

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  2. AnonymousJanuary 30, 2011 at 7:36 AM

    Very good tease. Fun. xx

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  3. ArleneJanuary 30, 2011 at 7:40 AM

    absolutely love the end line. Your smooth writing style draws me in, and I must read more.

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  4. Sarah GrimmJanuary 30, 2011 at 7:51 AM

    Yup, it does seem like things are about to get interesting. :) Great six.

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  5. Rebecca RoyceJanuary 30, 2011 at 8:08 AM

    I'm certainly interested. Well done!

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  6. Taryn KincaidJanuary 30, 2011 at 8:12 AM

    Oooh. Love hunky docs and hunky firefighters. Liking Dr. Cruz already!

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  7. KL/LEJanuary 30, 2011 at 8:56 AM

    Intriguing set up, thanks for sharing!

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  8. Emma PetersenJanuary 30, 2011 at 9:17 AM

    Ooooh! I love the name Cruz!

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  9. Claire RobynsJanuary 30, 2011 at 9:19 AM

    Interesting setup, looking forward to reading more next week

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  10. Lisa FoxJanuary 30, 2011 at 10:42 AM

    I think that things will be interesting indeed!

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  11. AnonymousJanuary 30, 2011 at 10:47 AM

    Hunky firemen and er docs! What's not to love?

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  12. D CarneyJanuary 30, 2011 at 10:49 AM

    Ha! I like her spunk already!

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  13. TrishJanuary 30, 2011 at 10:59 AM

    Great characterization of both here, and in such few words. Excellent job!

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  14. UnknownJanuary 30, 2011 at 11:39 AM

    I'm w/ Dr. Cruz. Sounds interesting to me too.

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  15. Lex ValentineJanuary 30, 2011 at 11:54 AM

    Love it when things are just this side of interesting!

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  16. Sandra SookooJanuary 30, 2011 at 2:10 PM

    Can't wait to see what happens!

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  17. Darcy DrakeJanuary 30, 2011 at 2:13 PM

    I love how you give a taste of each character with this snippet. ^^

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  18. Marie DeesJanuary 30, 2011 at 2:41 PM

    LOL. Weddings should never be interesting. (But it's great when they are.)

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  19. Cate MastersJanuary 30, 2011 at 3:30 PM

    Sounds like the reception will be a blast! Would love to read more.

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  20. Jessica E. SubjectJanuary 30, 2011 at 7:35 PM

    Sounds like an interesting ceremony already. Great six! I look forward to reading more.

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  21. Eve CassidyJanuary 30, 2011 at 8:05 PM

    nice setup.

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  22. UnknownJanuary 31, 2011 at 11:31 PM

    Thanks to everyone who stopped by and commented! I'm just getting done reading the SSS posts myself. I slept the last couple of days away! Good for the body, but not good when you need to get things done!

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  23. Hailey EdwardsFebruary 1, 2011 at 11:00 PM

    "On this side of interesting" made me laugh. Great excerpt.

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