Sunday, January 23, 2011

SIX SENTENCE SUNDAY POST...

Morning!!  Let's see what Roxanne and Jett are doing in my wip, Dating 911...


“I’ve been thinking,” Jett said close to her ear, interrupting her thoughts.



She glanced into the mirror behind the bar, and met his gaze. Amusement danced within, taunting her. She ground her teeth together. His dark head was next to hers as he leaned in close. Heat radiated off his body in waves. Despite the discord that held every muscle taut, tiny flames of desire licked along her skin.


She forced her jaw to relax, trying to squash the sensations rippling up and down her spine. “Well, don’t strain too hard. You’re libel to burst an artery and herniate your brain.”




That's it for now!  See you next Sunday!  Check out the other Six Sentence authors at http://sixsunday.blogspot.com/

Enjoy the rest of your Sunday!
Kathleen
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21 comments:

  1. An Open BookJanuary 23, 2011 at 8:39 AM

    Oh my... the tension, sexual that is, can be felt- great descriptive Six

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  2. Ann MayburnJanuary 23, 2011 at 8:49 AM

    I love a sassy leading lady. Nicely done :)

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  3. Krista D. BallJanuary 23, 2011 at 9:22 AM

    Artery popping = bad!

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  4. Lisa FoxJanuary 23, 2011 at 9:56 AM

    Really nice tension!

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  5. UnknownJanuary 23, 2011 at 11:39 AM

    LOL. Love her comment. Great tension.

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  6. Jessica E. SubjectJanuary 23, 2011 at 12:13 PM

    Wonder how long she'll hold out. :)

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  7. Sandra SookooJanuary 23, 2011 at 1:15 PM

    lol love it!

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  8. AnonymousJanuary 23, 2011 at 1:21 PM

    Loved this six. dissapointed when it ended! *Clicks fingers* more please!

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  9. Joleene NaylorJanuary 23, 2011 at 2:31 PM

    ha ha! I love her response! That made me chuckle! :)

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  10. ArleneJanuary 23, 2011 at 2:47 PM

    great end line.

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  11. TrishJanuary 23, 2011 at 3:00 PM

    Wonderful sexual tension and love the snappy dialogue!

    Wonderful job!

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  12. Alanna CocaJanuary 23, 2011 at 4:15 PM

    Nice six! Very descriptive.

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  13. Leigh EllwoodJanuary 23, 2011 at 6:13 PM

    Nicely done!

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  14. Eve CassidyJanuary 23, 2011 at 7:45 PM

    Hehehe. Great Six!

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  15. UnknownJanuary 24, 2011 at 2:38 AM

    Thanks everyone for your kind comments! It's 2:37 am Mountain time and I just got through reading all 60 of SSS posts! Such a talented group!

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  16. LizJanuary 24, 2011 at 4:56 AM

    LOL - thanks for a laugh this Monday morning

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  17. Cate MastersJanuary 24, 2011 at 5:25 AM

    Oo, a feisty heroine. Sounds great.

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  18. Hailey EdwardsJanuary 24, 2011 at 5:51 AM

    Intense. Love her remark.

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  19. JoAnne KenrickJanuary 24, 2011 at 7:19 AM

    fab tension... spicy six!

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  20. D. F. KriegerJanuary 24, 2011 at 12:26 PM

    Alpha males and thinking, never really a girls dream combination! At least not for the girl butting heads with him! LOL

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  21. Emily CaleJanuary 24, 2011 at 8:34 PM

    Great last line! Must. Read. More.

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