Saturday, April 9, 2011

SIX SENTENCE SUNDAY~11

Today's Six comes from a wip I started a couple of years ago, sitting in my Mother's hospital room before she passed away.  It's been on my mind lately.  Guess that is her way of nudging me from beyond to get it finished...It's tentatively titled "Temperatures Rising".  Thanks for stopping by! And don't forget to check out the other great authors and their Six at
http://sixsunday.blogspot.com/ . 

A roar from a crowd of men stationed behind her at the mahogany bar drew her attention. They enthusiastically slapped their hands in high fives as they greeted a newcomer to their group. He was extremely attractive in an Ewan Macgregor kind of way with wavy brown hair, prominent brows over eyes she could easily immerse herself in, a squared jaw with a hint of five o’clock shadow, and a fantastic pair of lips. A sigh of bliss escaped her. All contemplation of the commitment she’d sworn to herself vanished from her brain as the cells sizzled.



See ya next Sunday!
Kathleen
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23 comments:

  1. Jessica E. SubjectApril 9, 2011 at 5:01 AM

    He sounds wonderful! Great six!

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  2. AnonymousApril 10, 2011 at 6:58 AM

    Great description, really nice 6 xx

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  3. Rebecca RoyceApril 10, 2011 at 7:11 AM

    Great 6! We should always listen to our Moms. Even when they prod us from beyond. I think that is great descriptive language.

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  4. Cate MastersApril 10, 2011 at 7:36 AM

    You had me at Ewan Macgregor, lol. Great setup - hope to read what comes next.

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  5. ArleneApril 10, 2011 at 8:15 AM

    I'd love to be in that bar. Great snippet.

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  6. Sarah GrimmApril 10, 2011 at 8:23 AM

    *sigh* He sounds delish. Great six! You need to pay attention to your mother's prodding.

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  7. Hailey EdwardsApril 10, 2011 at 9:14 AM

    Oh, he does sound tasty. ;)

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  8. Jessica KnaussApril 10, 2011 at 9:30 AM

    Oh, commitment, it can be so difficult!

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  9. Joanne StewartApril 10, 2011 at 9:44 AM

    Great description. He sounds yummy!

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  10. Claire RobynsApril 10, 2011 at 10:38 AM

    He sounds yummy

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  11. Sandy N.April 10, 2011 at 12:36 PM

    I love those sizzling neurons! What a fun six sentences.

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  12. LindsayApril 10, 2011 at 2:28 PM

    I can see the steam rising already.

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  13. Liana BrooksApril 10, 2011 at 3:03 PM

    Nice!

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  14. UnknownApril 10, 2011 at 5:11 PM

    Love the idea of sizzling brain cells!

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  15. Laura KayeApril 10, 2011 at 5:22 PM

    Descriptive, sexy, funny!

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  16. AnonymousApril 10, 2011 at 6:07 PM

    Love the set up and he sounds super cute. Great six!

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  17. Lauri J OwenApril 10, 2011 at 11:11 PM

    Ewan Macgregor! Yum! lol.

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  18. UnknownApril 11, 2011 at 11:37 AM

    Oh, Ewan MacGregor... (who was babysat by my old English teacher)! Great six!

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  19. Jayel KayeApril 12, 2011 at 5:52 AM

    Oh yes. if he's like Ewan, he's perfect

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  20. Roberta WalkerApril 14, 2011 at 10:06 PM

    YUM!

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  21. Vivien JacksonApril 24, 2011 at 11:22 AM

    Man looking like that might cause me to stand up and cheer, too. Nice six!

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  22. Vivien JacksonApril 24, 2011 at 11:30 AM

    Yeah, if he walked into my local pub, I might stand up and clap, too. :) Hot description.

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  23. AllureVanSanzApril 24, 2011 at 2:08 PM

    I wish I were sitting right next to her!

    Great 6!
    Best,
    Allure Van Sanz

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