“Well, you know, I stopped at the nudey bar and slammed a few beers,” Jett joked as he took his axe and thrust the sharpened blade into the ceiling tiles.
“What would your hot, little nursey think about you in a nudey bar? She’d kick your ass,” Seth said.
“Roxanne and I aren’t exclusive,” Jett said. Fresh misery constricted his chest that had nothing to do with the tight SCBA mask.
“Yeah, and Mother Theresa wears hot pink thongs and has a nipple piercing,” Seth said moving down the row of desks beyond Jett’s line of vision as he spoke.
“Dude, that is just wrong on so many levels," Jett laughed.
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I love the talk between them while working. Feels very realistic.
ReplyDeleteLove their banter. Perfect for two dudes!
ReplyDeleteIt totally is wrong, but also funny. Nice banter.
ReplyDeleteLOL so wrong but so funny! Nice 6!
ReplyDeleteMaybe be wrong, but what a good come back. Great six with a hint of his inner turmoil.
ReplyDeleteVery authentic feel to this - great work! And yes, wrong on so many levels but too funny!
ReplyDeleteVery fun conversation! Great six!
ReplyDeleteLove me some firemen! Great six :)
ReplyDeleteLove the banter - so wrong - but so hilarious!
ReplyDeleteGreat Six!!!!!
Love the contrast between the serious work they're doing and their banter. That levity give such a sense of reality to this snippet.
ReplyDeleteLove their camaraderie!
ReplyDeleteLove the banter! It is so natural and totally male-like. :)
ReplyDeleteI love how he isn't happy about the relationship not being exclusive - nice twist.
ReplyDeleteI love how he isn't happy about the relationship not being exclusive - nice twist.
ReplyDeleteLove the banter between the two. Your hero looks a little like Mark Valley from the TV show Human Target
ReplyDeletePoor guy. You conveyed his longing for more in their relationship well. The touch of humor at the end adds good balance. :)
ReplyDeleteWonderful dialogue, very convincing and humorous.
ReplyDeleteNice last line :)
ReplyDeleteLove the bantering between friends! :)
ReplyDeleteRealistic dialogue -- this sounds just like something a couple of guys would say! I love your sense of humor.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the exchange a lot. Only small comment might be that every line of dialogue doesn't require a dialogue tag, especially when you've got great identifying material like how his chest hurt. Loves me some firemen!!!
ReplyDeleteLove it - and that photo is yum, too! ;)
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