Tuesday, December 4, 2012

HUMP DAY HOOK~6

Wow! It's the middle of the week already? Happy Hump Day to you all!  HDH is where a group of author's get together and post a paragraph from a current published work or a work in progress.  Today, I'm going back to my wip, Dating Impossible.  Dr. Cruz Avery drops in unnanounced and gets an eye full! LOL  Comments are always appreciated and welcome!



At the doorway to the bathroom, Cruz leaned his shoulder on the doorjamb and absorbed the scene before him.  JJ lay in the middle of an oversized tub filled with bubbles.  The fragrant scent of roses filled his nostrils.  She held a beer to her plump lips and sang into the bottle like a microphone.  Water sloshed over the edge and onto the tiled floor as her hips swayed to the music.  Her taut pink nipples played peek-a-boo through the sudsy water.  A tempest storm of desire flooded his veins and his cock bulged against the fabric of his pants.

“…God I feel Like hell tonight...  tears of rage I can not fight... I'd be the last to help you understand...Are you strong enough to be my man..."
That's all folks...tune in next week for another HDH! Don't forget to check out the other HDH's here: http://kerriannecoombes.wordpress.com/
Have an awesome day!
Kathleen
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27 comments:

  1. AnonymousDecember 4, 2012 at 7:37 PM

    That's it???

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  2. UnknownDecember 4, 2012 at 7:43 PM

    LOL...Only one paragraph-ish allowed Oksana. That is the hook! Besides, I have to finish the scene. :) Thanks for popping over!

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  3. Flossie Benton RogersDecember 4, 2012 at 9:54 PM

    Hot scene. She seems fun too-- singing in the beer bottle.

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  4. UnknownDecember 4, 2012 at 11:52 PM

    Thanks, Flossie! They have been a fun couple to write!

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  5. UnknownDecember 5, 2012 at 1:31 AM

    I loved it...especially the water sloshing!

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  6. AnonymousDecember 5, 2012 at 3:22 AM

    a funny and sexy scene at the same time. Singing in a beer bottle made me smile.

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  7. Naomi ShawDecember 5, 2012 at 5:15 AM

    Oh so sexy.Can't wait to find out more

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  8. Lacie NationDecember 5, 2012 at 5:57 AM

    That was HOT!!! I love the sexual tension.

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  9. AnonymousDecember 5, 2012 at 6:04 AM

    JJ is obviously modled on me! LOL she is very cool. Great HdH Kerrianne Coombes

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  10. UnknownDecember 5, 2012 at 7:10 AM

    Very sexy. Just kept getting better and better. :)

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  11. Molly DanielsDecember 5, 2012 at 7:15 AM

    Love it! Great job:)

    And I'm with Oksana....that's IT?? What happens next? (as if we can't figure it out, lol...!)

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  12. UnknownDecember 5, 2012 at 9:04 PM

    Why have I not read your writing sooner?! Well, besides the snipped of Doctor of Deception, of course haha. Love that scene, I want more!

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  13. UnknownDecember 5, 2012 at 10:45 PM

    Thanks Michelle...Cruz's socks are about to get a little wet! Tee hee....

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  14. UnknownDecember 5, 2012 at 10:45 PM

    Ciara, she her antics make me laugh, too. Thank you for commenting and stopping by!

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  15. UnknownDecember 5, 2012 at 10:46 PM

    Thank you, Naomi!

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  16. UnknownDecember 5, 2012 at 10:47 PM

    Lacie, usually sex is hard for me to write, but the tension between these two have flown off the computer keyboard!

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  17. UnknownDecember 5, 2012 at 10:48 PM

    Thank you, Jennifer! I love these two doctors!

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  18. UnknownDecember 5, 2012 at 10:49 PM

    Molly...what happens next is more than Sex! Cruz is in for a whopping surprise! **wink**

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  19. UnknownDecember 5, 2012 at 10:50 PM

    Phoenix Johnson...I dunno! But I'm so glad you did! LOL

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  20. UnknownDecember 5, 2012 at 10:50 PM

    Kerrianne...why are you anonymous? LOL. Of course she is modeled after the "naughty mommy" ROFL!

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  21. UnknownDecember 5, 2012 at 11:06 PM

    Great hook! I've had a few of those moments, lol. Usually, I'd lost count of how many I'd put away, but I've never been lucky enough to have someone lusting after me while drunken bubble-bath singing. =)

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  22. UnknownDecember 5, 2012 at 11:12 PM

    Hahahaa, Delena! Love it!

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  23. UnknownDecember 6, 2012 at 6:56 AM

    Love descriptive writing like this. I saw the scene play out in front of me. And it hooked me because I want to read more!

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  24. UnknownDecember 6, 2012 at 7:31 AM

    Thanks, Paloma! High praise!

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  25. Dee Ann W.December 6, 2012 at 1:33 PM

    I agree with "that's it?" Wow--steamy! I can't wait to read more. :-)

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  26. UnknownDecember 6, 2012 at 7:02 PM

    Thanks, Dee Ann! There will be more from these 2 to come!

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  27. ColetteDecember 9, 2012 at 1:00 PM

    Great hook!
    I'd be happy with just the bath and the beer! ;)

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