Tuesday, January 29, 2013

HUMP DAY HOOK ~13

Morning Humpers! I'm back with a paragraph from my free read, Decadent Medicine.  Here a nurse and a doctor have an unintentional meeting at a night club that turns into something more...

“Want to do something a little bit… decadent, Meagan?” he whispered to her, voice full of promise.

Meagan stared into those blue eyes, mesmerized. That was a rhetorical question if she’d ever heard one. But part of her held back. Her more sensible side the one she wanted to tell to shut the fuck up right now side… “I bet you do decadence with all the girls, Dr…ah I mean, James.”

He frowned. “Actually, no.” That deadly smile was back. “Can I let you in on a little secret?”

I hope you enjoyed! The entire free read is available here:
http://afterdarkonlinestories.blogspot.com/2012/11/decadent-medicine-by-kathleen-grieve.html


Catch the other authors participating in Hump Day Hook here:http://humpdayhook.blogspot.co.uk/

Now get humping!!
Kathleen



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24 comments:

  1. Layna PimentelJanuary 29, 2013 at 6:41 PM

    And of course you had to stop there. You're such a tease!

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  2. Beth D. CarterJanuary 29, 2013 at 7:02 PM

    Love the greeting...Morning Humpers! Love it! Great read! Thanks!

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  3. UnknownJanuary 29, 2013 at 8:59 PM

    Okay, I am as curious as a cat, so it's killing me wondering what the secret is, lol. Great hook!

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  4. UnknownJanuary 29, 2013 at 9:22 PM

    You're such a tease. ;) Good hook. Now I'm wondering what the secret is.
    =)
    C.

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  5. Ciaran DwynvilJanuary 30, 2013 at 1:40 AM

    Good hook. Now I want to know what the secret is, lol.

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  6. AnonymousJanuary 30, 2013 at 4:29 AM

    Oh i bet he just does... LOL

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  7. Molly DanielsJanuary 30, 2013 at 6:49 AM

    I'm with the others, wanting to know his secret! Great job!

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  8. AdrianaJanuary 30, 2013 at 7:03 AM

    definitely hooked - wanna know the secret!

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  9. Gem SivadJanuary 30, 2013 at 7:07 AM

    Hmmm definitely teasing me into wanting more. :D

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  10. UnknownJanuary 30, 2013 at 7:38 AM

    definitely left me wanting more...what secret? LOL

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  11. AnonymousJanuary 30, 2013 at 7:52 AM

    Secrets, eh? That'll keep us reading.

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  12. Jessica E. SubjectJanuary 30, 2013 at 7:54 AM

    A naughty hook! I want to know his secret! :-)

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  13. Christina ColeJanuary 30, 2013 at 7:57 AM

    Secrets are such fun! Great way to hook your readers.

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  14. Angelica DawsonJanuary 30, 2013 at 8:42 AM

    Now we all want to know his secret. Great tease

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  15. Sarah CassJanuary 30, 2013 at 9:41 AM

    Oooh, I want to know the secret very much. Wonderful hook.

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  16. UnknownJanuary 30, 2013 at 10:35 AM

    Great tension, and I'm loving that it ends with the promise of a secret!

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  17. UnknownJanuary 30, 2013 at 11:12 AM

    Go decadence, go decadence!

    Great hook!

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  18. ColetteJanuary 30, 2013 at 11:15 AM

    HA! And they dare call ME a tease! Leaving off with, do you want to know a secret! Mean thing!

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  19. SpookyMrsGreenJanuary 30, 2013 at 12:28 PM

    Ha ha, that was very cheeky and such a tease!

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  20. Sandra SookooJanuary 30, 2013 at 12:55 PM

    omg, what's the secret? Loved your hook!

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  21. AnonymousJanuary 30, 2013 at 3:39 PM

    Secret? I want to know the secret!

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  22. Flossie Benton RogersJanuary 30, 2013 at 7:11 PM

    I really want to know more about this intriguing man. Nice hook!

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  23. UnknownJanuary 31, 2013 at 7:49 AM

    You couldn't just give us that next sentence, could you? What's the secret? And lord, I hope she let's her wild side out.

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  24. SherryGLoagJanuary 31, 2013 at 1:06 PM

    Great hook, terrible tease :-)

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