Sunday, February 12, 2012

SIX SENTENCE SUNDAY~36



Happy Sunday!  Today I've posted Six from my wip, From Lust To Ashes. My heroine is a Phoenix Femme Fatale Agent and her powers are very weak and acting all wonky at the moment, especially after she'd just saved them from an attack...Comments are always welcome and appreciated. I love to hear what you all think!


“Tatum?” he spoke her name as he reached her side, placing the back of his hand on her forehead.  Heat and pain seared his skin and he yanked his hand back, staring with disbelief at the small blisters and red marks forming on his fingers and palm.  “Christ!  You’re burning up.”
She gave him a wobbly smile.  “Wouldn’t be the first time.”
“What?” he asked.
“Never mind,” she whispered,  “inside joke.”
That's it for now!  I hope you enjoyed my snippet!  Don't forget to stop by www.sixsunday.com and read some more Six's from some really great authors!

Happy Sunday!!
Kathleen

11 comments:

Alix said...

Love the flow and her humour. Fantastic six!

Anonymous said...

Fantastic six. Gives us a real tease into her character.... This was from kerrianne, blogger was being a bad boy!

Jessica Subject said...

Such a tease she is. I wonder what will happen if he does more than touch her with his hand. Great six! :)

Stacey said...

Love the playfulness in the serious situation! Nicely done!

Liz said...

well said, lots of emotion and info packed into a few words.

The AfterDark World with Ray Sostre said...

Tight flow, tight humor, tight story. Great Work Kat, this has caught my attention.

Cara Bristol said...

Nice word play. Fun.

Sandra Sookoo said...

Liked the tension and intrigue :-)

angelaquarles.com said...

Great 6, very intriguing! If he touched the back of his hand to her forehead though, would the blisters appear in his palm?

Gayle said...

Fab six!

Karysa Faire said...

Fabulous six! I want to know more...