Saturday, June 25, 2011

SIX SENTENCE SUNDAY~19


Welcome back for another Six Sentences of my wip, Dating Impossible.  We left off last week with Dr. Cruz Avery finding a woman struggling into her bridesmaid dress... As always, all comments are welcome and appreciated. I return comments 100%! Don't forget to stop by www.sixsunday.com to read great snippets from the other authors participating in SSS.
Happy Sunday!
Kathleen  
     Sunlight streamed through the window, highlighting a tumble of strawberry blonde curls that disappeared over one shoulder, reminding him of an angel. 
     Another round of expletives came from the woman.  The cursing along with the sexy tattoo of an elaborate lotus flower in a splash of solid colors engraved in the flesh midway between her upper hips and her lower back, reminded him that this was no angel.
    
     “Can I help?” he asked, entering the room and closing the door behind him to allow her privacy.

12 comments:

Jessica Subject said...

I had hoped he would offer her assistance. :D Great six!

Lisa Fox said...

Yes, I think he can help!

Cate Masters said...

Great imagery. I was hoping he'd offer to help too! Nice work.

Gem Sivad said...

She sounds gorgeous. Lotus tat and strawberry blond hair. Yeah, I'm thinking he'll assist. :)

Kathleen Grieve said...

Thanks! Ladies! :) Guess we will find out next week...

Dee Carney said...

I love the way she's described. Nicely done!

Angela S. Stone said...

Mmm!! I could use *his* assistance!!!!

Fantastic as always!!

xx
A.

Taryn Kincaid said...

No angel, indeed. Suspect he's no altar boy, either. Nice description of the scene.

Lindsay said...

Okay, he goes in the room and closes the door so she can have privacy. Sounds like he wants them both the enjoy the privacy

Sarah Grimm said...

He closed the door for her privacy, huh? Somehow I don't believe it's all about her. lol Great six!

gayleramage said...

Ha, love the contrast between the comparison to an angel in the first paragraph, then the expletives in the second one. Great snippet!

Pippa Jay said...

I love an angel with a sassy mouth!