Sunday, July 3, 2011

SIX SENTENCE SUNDAY~20


Morning all!  Happy Fourth of July weekend!  Thanks to those who keep coming back and reading my Six! I truly appreciate all your wonderful comments. To check out other wonderful snippets from some really awesome authors, go to http://www.sixsunday.com/  !!  I promise, you won't be disappointed! Now, let's get some fireworks started. More from my wip, Dating Impossible, the sequel to Dating 911. 
Kathleen

He cleared his throat with obnoxious intent, not bothering to cover his mouth.


“Oh!” she exclaimed, whirling around to confront him.  “It’s you, Jett!”


Gown gathered with one arm in a careless gesture across her front, Cruz noted what the smooth fabric missed--A generous portion of exposed cleavage. He lifted his gaze to her face as his sizzling brain registered she’d mistaken him for his twin brother and recognition mixed with disappointment slammed into his gut.


The spitfire tomboy who hounded him and Jett interfering with their boyhood exploits for most of his youth had turned into quite a beauty. “My, my," Cruz tsked, “such foul language, and from such a beautiful mouth.”



17 comments:

Trish said...

Love these types of books, where the tomboy becomes a woman and the childhood playmate takes an interest in her. Love your sixes!

Cate Masters said...

Sizzling fireworks for sure! Poor guy, hope his brother doesn't have all the fun, lol

Gem Sivad said...

Mistaken identity and lustful looks. I think her homecoming will be interesting. :)

JoAnne Kenrick said...

Me, too! I love a good tomboy to sexy, curvy woman story :) Fab six!

Jessica K said...

Identical twins, an ever fresh classic!

Eleri Stone said...

Twins! Tomboy all grown up and coming home! What a great combination :P

Pippa Jay said...

But is he going to 'fess up to being the 'other' twin?

Sarah Grimm said...

This sounds like a great story! Can't way to read more of it.

Lindsay said...

Hope his brother never finds out what he wants to do. Love the last line

Misa Buckley said...

Not bothering him now, is she? lol.

Nice six.

Dee Carney said...

Very nice six. Love reunions.

Monica Enderle Pierce said...

That last line is so ballsy, and so made of awesome! I'm already rooting for him to get the girl!

Michele Barrow-Belisle said...

Hmmmm, twins...can't wait to see how this turns out!

Randi Alexander said...

Things could get interesting! Great six!

Kathleen Grieve said...

Thanks for all your encouraging comments!

Zee Monodee said...

Oh, this is interesting! Love how you set this up. :)

1000th.monkey said...

I like the "recognition and disappointment". Can't wait to see what happens next.