Sunday, July 24, 2011

SIX SENTENCE SUNDAY~23

Welcome back!  My pic today is so totally my hero--always taking what he wants! LOL  This week in Dating 911, Jett and his fellow firefighter, Seth are working a fire.  Seth asks where Jett's been and an interesting conversation ensues...

Well, you know, I stopped at the nudey bar and slammed a few beers,” Jett joked as he took his axe and thrust the sharpened blade into the ceiling tiles.



“What would your hot, little nursey think about you in a nudey bar? She’d kick your ass,” Seth said.


“Roxanne and I aren’t exclusive,” Jett said. Fresh misery constricted his chest that had nothing to do with the tight SCBA mask.


“Yeah, and Mother Theresa wears hot pink thongs and has a nipple piercing,” Seth said moving down the row of desks beyond Jett’s line of vision as he spoke.


“Dude, that is just wrong on so many levels," Jett laughed. 

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Kathleen

22 comments:

Jessica Subject said...

I love the talk between them while working. Feels very realistic.

Jayel Kaye said...

Love their banter. Perfect for two dudes!

Vivien Jackson said...

It totally is wrong, but also funny. Nice banter.

Sandra Sookoo said...

LOL so wrong but so funny! Nice 6!

Gem Sivad said...

Maybe be wrong, but what a good come back. Great six with a hint of his inner turmoil.

Cate Masters said...

Very authentic feel to this - great work! And yes, wrong on so many levels but too funny!

Bree said...

Very fun conversation! Great six!

Luxie Ryder said...

Love me some firemen! Great six :)

Carrie Ann Ryan said...

Love the banter - so wrong - but so hilarious!

Great Six!!!!!

Monica Enderle Pierce said...

Love the contrast between the serious work they're doing and their banter. That levity give such a sense of reality to this snippet.

Lex Valentine said...

Love their camaraderie!

Zee Monodee said...

Love the banter! It is so natural and totally male-like. :)

wearegoingonawitchhunt said...

I love how he isn't happy about the relationship not being exclusive - nice twist.

wearegoingonawitchhunt said...

I love how he isn't happy about the relationship not being exclusive - nice twist.

Lindsay said...

Love the banter between the two. Your hero looks a little like Mark Valley from the TV show Human Target

Hailey Edwards said...

Poor guy. You conveyed his longing for more in their relationship well. The touch of humor at the end adds good balance. :)

Jessica K said...

Wonderful dialogue, very convincing and humorous.

1000th.monkey said...

Nice last line :)

Dee Carney said...

Love the bantering between friends! :)

Sandy Nachlinger said...

Realistic dialogue -- this sounds just like something a couple of guys would say! I love your sense of humor.

Laura Kaye said...

I enjoyed the exchange a lot. Only small comment might be that every line of dialogue doesn't require a dialogue tag, especially when you've got great identifying material like how his chest hurt. Loves me some firemen!!!

Lucy Felthouse said...

Love it - and that photo is yum, too! ;)