“Well, you know, I stopped at the nudey bar and slammed a few beers,” Jett joked as he took his axe and thrust the sharpened blade into the ceiling tiles.
“What would your hot, little nursey think about you in a nudey bar? She’d kick your ass,” Seth said.
“Roxanne and I aren’t exclusive,” Jett said. Fresh misery constricted his chest that had nothing to do with the tight SCBA mask.
“Yeah, and Mother Theresa wears hot pink thongs and has a nipple piercing,” Seth said moving down the row of desks beyond Jett’s line of vision as he spoke.
“Dude, that is just wrong on so many levels," Jett laughed.
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22 comments:
I love the talk between them while working. Feels very realistic.
Love their banter. Perfect for two dudes!
It totally is wrong, but also funny. Nice banter.
LOL so wrong but so funny! Nice 6!
Maybe be wrong, but what a good come back. Great six with a hint of his inner turmoil.
Very authentic feel to this - great work! And yes, wrong on so many levels but too funny!
Very fun conversation! Great six!
Love me some firemen! Great six :)
Love the banter - so wrong - but so hilarious!
Great Six!!!!!
Love the contrast between the serious work they're doing and their banter. That levity give such a sense of reality to this snippet.
Love their camaraderie!
Love the banter! It is so natural and totally male-like. :)
I love how he isn't happy about the relationship not being exclusive - nice twist.
I love how he isn't happy about the relationship not being exclusive - nice twist.
Love the banter between the two. Your hero looks a little like Mark Valley from the TV show Human Target
Poor guy. You conveyed his longing for more in their relationship well. The touch of humor at the end adds good balance. :)
Wonderful dialogue, very convincing and humorous.
Nice last line :)
Love the bantering between friends! :)
Realistic dialogue -- this sounds just like something a couple of guys would say! I love your sense of humor.
I enjoyed the exchange a lot. Only small comment might be that every line of dialogue doesn't require a dialogue tag, especially when you've got great identifying material like how his chest hurt. Loves me some firemen!!!
Love it - and that photo is yum, too! ;)
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