Welcome back for another Hump Day! This week's snippet comes from my wip, Temperature's Rising. Hope you enjoy! And don't forget to take a look at the other author's participating in this week's Humping here: http://humpdayhook.blogspot.com/
My hero for this book, Dr. Ryder Alexander came from my love of Ewan... **sigh** Remember my little drama queen nursing student had puked all over my hero's shoes? Now we switch to his pov...
Ryder turned, sloshed, slipped and barely regained his balance before falling flat on his ass in the muck covering his shoes and slacks. The aroma of vomit stifled his first instinct to chase after the gorgeous brunette that had rocked his world several times over last night.
“Let her go, Ryder, we have work to do,” Dr. McMillan stated flatly.
Ryder glanced at the patient with the open abdominal wound and stepped toward the bed to assist with the massive dressing change. Disappointment slammed into his gut as the elusive woman escaped him once more. His duty was to his patient but later, he promised himself he'd definitely be tracking Anne down.
Hope you enjoyed! Talk to ya all later, Gators!
15 comments:
I wonder why he wishes to pursue her. Hmmm. Great hook.
Oh, so much going on in this excerpt! Hooked me! :)
OMG...seriously...he should have run after her. LOL
Fab hook, Kathleen!
I wouldn't want this guy to be my doc. Talk about off task...
Yay, he will definitely pursue her later! (I hope)
That's one way of getting a fella's attention! lol. Very vivid scene.
Great hook, well done!
Jumps, or rather, falls right into things! Lol! Nicely done.
Haha. That is definitely one way to leave an impression. It's great that he doesn't even mind seeing a bad side of her and wants to chase after her. He's a keeper. I hope they get to meet again soon :D
When a man sees your less than perfect side first and still wants to talk to you - he's the one!
Ohh, loved it! Def hooked me :)
I don't think I'd want either one of them for my doctor or nurse...but as a romance story, sounds interesting!
maybe he should run after her! give her a big hug and rub up against her and 'share the love.' lol! thanks for sharing. looking forward to when this story is out in the world. :)
C.R.
Hopefully he can make a better impression if there's a next time
So need more....think a woman's worst nightmare is to puke in front of a guy.
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