Nice.
He was younger than her last assignment. Her sex clenched and she licked her lips. Her body hummed with anticipation, panties already damp despite the snow drifting lazily to the ground. Wonder how long he will resist before he does as the Sun Counsel mandated?
Hopefully, a long, long, time.
That is all for now but if you liked this snippet, the entire first chapter of this wip will be posted on Tuesday as part of Tuesday's Tales. I'd love to see what you think and if I should keep going with it! Don't forget to fill your TBR pile from other fabulous authors that you can find here: http://www.sixsunday.com/
Enjoy the rest of your Sunday!
Kathleen
33 comments:
Sensational. I love she is licking he lips at his age. Fabulous pick with this six.
Thanks, Alix! :)
Beautiful work, I love the style you put on there. Lovely Six!
Another hot 6 Kathleen- love waking up on Sunday to arousing words- lol
Dawne P
I definitely want more of this! Great six! :)
Mmmm, seems as if he will be a tasty treat! Great Six!
I love the set up on this one - very nicely done
She sounds hot enough to melt that snow!
I can feel her licking her chops over him. Fantastic.
Oo, she's evil, lol - I love it! Wonder how long before she defies the Council? :)
Love this six, Kathleen! Can't wait to read more!
fabulous! intriguing..want to know more!
liz
What an intriguing snippet! Great six :)
Hooo-boy! He's in for some hard times and we're gonna love every minute! Great six!
Great snippet Kathleen! very sexy, descriptive writing!
Steamy and intriguing.
Like it a lot! Great six
I like it! Great work!
Now I can't wait for Tuesday! Great job, Kathleen. :)
You've hooked me. It's going to be torture waiting to see what happens. Great six!
Hot! and you left me hanging!
Oh, love this (and young is good :) )
great 6
Okay, you hooked me. I need more!
Iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinteresting. I wonder if he'll have any say in the matter ;)
There seems to be an evilness to her.
There were a lot of surprises when I wrote this and with every paragraph it is changing, morphing into something I feel can be spectacular! *keeps fingers crossed* Thanks for all your great comments!!
Very nice - loved the line about despite the cold.
Only one way to put this. I. Want. More.
She wants him to resist? Oohhh. Why?
Provocative six.
OMG. The last line! So creepy but it made me smile.
My body was humming right along with hers!!! Loved it! Can't wait to read the full chapter:) xo
Intriguing set up!
Very vivid! Hell, I think I just felt what she did! :)
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