Happy Hump Day! Today's hook is again from my unedited wip, Dating Impossible and from JJ's pov. Here's a little bit of real life medical drama in action. And yes, doctors do cuss in real life. They are human and when shit happens...Hope you enjoy!
“…22
year old male shot in the chest. No breath sounds left upper lobe. BP 86/42. Heart rate 146. Resps 35 per minute…”
On
the count of three the patient was moved from stretcher to the waiting hospital gurney. The motion was swift and expertly done, but
the patient moaned and shouted cuss words as the jostling incurred more pain. “Take it easy! That fucking hurts, man.”
JJ
smoothly stepped to the head of the gurney and began her assessment.
“Sorry about that, my friend. But
there’s no help for it. Everything we do
is going to hurt right now. We will give
you pain meds as we can, but you’ve lost a lot of blood and your blood pressure
is dangerously low. Can you tell me what
happened?”
“Nothing
man.” His voice was muffled and a bit tinny
through the oxygen face mask he wore. “I
was just walking down the street minding my own business,” he said. His tone was defensive mixed with just a bit
of smugness that was typical of most gunshot victims.
JJ
rolled her eyes. Pretty much the
standard answer she’d expected. The
truth was he’d been shot by a store clerk trying to steal the money from the
cash register. “What’s your name?” As she spoke, she listened to his chest,
observed the unequal fall with each short rapid breath he struggled to
inhale. Pale skin slick with sweat, the
blood stained gauze dressing just under his left nipple peeled up along the
corners. She removed it and examined the
wound and fired off rapid orders to the team.
“Stat chest, full trauma panel including type and cross for four units
packed cells and keep two units ahead.
Set up for chest tube insertion and call the cardio thoracic surgeon on
call.”
Everyone
scrambled to do her bidding. All except
Angie, who stood leaning against the wall with the Xray viewers, clipboard
clasped to her chest. As the head nurse,
Angie was supposed to be recording and coordinating JJ’s orders.
“What
the fuck, Angie? Get your ass
moving. I need that chest tube tray now,
not in the next millennium,” JJ said.
At
the bite in JJ’s voice, all motion ceased for a fraction of a second. Glances were shared, the only sound coming
from the patient himself as he writhed, moaned, and shouted expletives of his
own. Angie’s gaze threw fire-sheathed
daggers at JJ, but she grudgingly pushed off the wall and did as
instructed. The monitor above the gurney
screamed and flashed the current vital signs.
Blood pressure dropped to 60/29.
Heart rate up to 180’s. Oxygen
saturation now read 85%. All activity
resumed with renewed vigor.
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Keep it real, my friends! Have a Happy Thanksgiving for those who celebrate it!
Kathleen
5 comments:
So well written x Exciting x
Thank you, Kerrianne!!
That was a great excerpt
Very fast paced. Nice!
Nice and very true. All of our members of the Phoenix knife and gun club were just minding their own business. Usually that business shows up on a toxicology screen. lol
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