Tuesday, December 4, 2012

HUMP DAY HOOK~6

Wow! It's the middle of the week already? Happy Hump Day to you all!  HDH is where a group of author's get together and post a paragraph from a current published work or a work in progress.  Today, I'm going back to my wip, Dating Impossible.  Dr. Cruz Avery drops in unnanounced and gets an eye full! LOL  Comments are always appreciated and welcome!



At the doorway to the bathroom, Cruz leaned his shoulder on the doorjamb and absorbed the scene before him.  JJ lay in the middle of an oversized tub filled with bubbles.  The fragrant scent of roses filled his nostrils.  She held a beer to her plump lips and sang into the bottle like a microphone.  Water sloshed over the edge and onto the tiled floor as her hips swayed to the music.  Her taut pink nipples played peek-a-boo through the sudsy water.  A tempest storm of desire flooded his veins and his cock bulged against the fabric of his pants.

“…God I feel Like hell tonight...  tears of rage I can not fight... I'd be the last to help you understand...Are you strong enough to be my man..."
That's all folks...tune in next week for another HDH! Don't forget to check out the other HDH's here: http://kerriannecoombes.wordpress.com/
Have an awesome day!
Kathleen

27 comments:

Oksana Konko said...

That's it???

Kathleen Grieve said...

LOL...Only one paragraph-ish allowed Oksana. That is the hook! Besides, I have to finish the scene. :) Thanks for popping over!

Flossie Benton Rogers said...

Hot scene. She seems fun too-- singing in the beer bottle.

Kathleen Grieve said...

Thanks, Flossie! They have been a fun couple to write!

Michelle Hoefle said...

I loved it...especially the water sloshing!

ciarandwynvil said...

a funny and sexy scene at the same time. Singing in a beer bottle made me smile.

Naomi said...

Oh so sexy.Can't wait to find out more

Lacie Nation said...

That was HOT!!! I love the sexual tension.

Anonymous said...

JJ is obviously modled on me! LOL she is very cool. Great HdH Kerrianne Coombes

Jennifer Simpkins said...

Very sexy. Just kept getting better and better. :)

Molly Daniels said...

Love it! Great job:)

And I'm with Oksana....that's IT?? What happens next? (as if we can't figure it out, lol...!)

Phoenix Johnson said...

Why have I not read your writing sooner?! Well, besides the snipped of Doctor of Deception, of course haha. Love that scene, I want more!

Kathleen Grieve said...

Thanks Michelle...Cruz's socks are about to get a little wet! Tee hee....

Kathleen Grieve said...

Ciara, she her antics make me laugh, too. Thank you for commenting and stopping by!

Kathleen Grieve said...

Thank you, Naomi!

Kathleen Grieve said...

Lacie, usually sex is hard for me to write, but the tension between these two have flown off the computer keyboard!

Kathleen Grieve said...

Thank you, Jennifer! I love these two doctors!

Kathleen Grieve said...

Molly...what happens next is more than Sex! Cruz is in for a whopping surprise! **wink**

Kathleen Grieve said...

Phoenix Johnson...I dunno! But I'm so glad you did! LOL

Kathleen Grieve said...

Kerrianne...why are you anonymous? LOL. Of course she is modeled after the "naughty mommy" ROFL!

Delena Silverfox said...

Great hook! I've had a few of those moments, lol. Usually, I'd lost count of how many I'd put away, but I've never been lucky enough to have someone lusting after me while drunken bubble-bath singing. =)

Kathleen Grieve said...

Hahahaa, Delena! Love it!

Paloma Beck said...

Love descriptive writing like this. I saw the scene play out in front of me. And it hooked me because I want to read more!

Kathleen Grieve said...

Thanks, Paloma! High praise!

Dee Ann Williamson said...

I agree with "that's it?" Wow--steamy! I can't wait to read more. :-)

Kathleen Grieve said...

Thanks, Dee Ann! There will be more from these 2 to come!

Colette Saucier said...

Great hook!
I'd be happy with just the bath and the beer! ;)