At
the doorway to the bathroom, Cruz leaned his shoulder on the doorjamb and
absorbed the scene before him. JJ lay in
the middle of an oversized tub filled with bubbles. The fragrant scent of roses filled his nostrils. She held a beer to her plump lips and sang
into the bottle like a microphone. Water
sloshed over the edge and onto the tiled floor as her hips swayed to the music. Her taut pink nipples played peek-a-boo
through the sudsy water. A tempest storm
of desire flooded his veins and his cock bulged against the fabric of his
pants.
“…God I feel Like hell tonight... tears of rage I can not fight... I'd be the last to help you understand...Are you strong enough to be my man..."
That's all folks...tune in next week for another HDH! Don't forget to check out the other HDH's here: http://kerriannecoombes.wordpress.com/
Have an awesome day!
Kathleen
27 comments:
That's it???
LOL...Only one paragraph-ish allowed Oksana. That is the hook! Besides, I have to finish the scene. :) Thanks for popping over!
Hot scene. She seems fun too-- singing in the beer bottle.
Thanks, Flossie! They have been a fun couple to write!
I loved it...especially the water sloshing!
a funny and sexy scene at the same time. Singing in a beer bottle made me smile.
Oh so sexy.Can't wait to find out more
That was HOT!!! I love the sexual tension.
JJ is obviously modled on me! LOL she is very cool. Great HdH Kerrianne Coombes
Very sexy. Just kept getting better and better. :)
Love it! Great job:)
And I'm with Oksana....that's IT?? What happens next? (as if we can't figure it out, lol...!)
Why have I not read your writing sooner?! Well, besides the snipped of Doctor of Deception, of course haha. Love that scene, I want more!
Thanks Michelle...Cruz's socks are about to get a little wet! Tee hee....
Ciara, she her antics make me laugh, too. Thank you for commenting and stopping by!
Thank you, Naomi!
Lacie, usually sex is hard for me to write, but the tension between these two have flown off the computer keyboard!
Thank you, Jennifer! I love these two doctors!
Molly...what happens next is more than Sex! Cruz is in for a whopping surprise! **wink**
Phoenix Johnson...I dunno! But I'm so glad you did! LOL
Kerrianne...why are you anonymous? LOL. Of course she is modeled after the "naughty mommy" ROFL!
Great hook! I've had a few of those moments, lol. Usually, I'd lost count of how many I'd put away, but I've never been lucky enough to have someone lusting after me while drunken bubble-bath singing. =)
Hahahaa, Delena! Love it!
Love descriptive writing like this. I saw the scene play out in front of me. And it hooked me because I want to read more!
Thanks, Paloma! High praise!
I agree with "that's it?" Wow--steamy! I can't wait to read more. :-)
Thanks, Dee Ann! There will be more from these 2 to come!
Great hook!
I'd be happy with just the bath and the beer! ;)
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