Welcome to another HDH and happy Hump Day to you! This week, I'm gonna try and hook you on my new wip, Temperatures Rising as Dating Impossible, book 2 of my Dating Series was contracted by Evernight Publishing and I hope to have a cover and release date for you all soon! This is a different story from last week's hook as I got sucked into the characters right away. My plan is to submit this for Evernight's Cupid's Conquest Line. My heroine a bartender who is a nursing student gets her first glimpse of the hero...
As she placed a
napkin on the gleaming wood in front of him, his green gaze swept the length of
her. Anne could swear she heard the heat
radiating off her skin with a crackle and hiss.
Sort of like the breakfast cereal. Boy,
would she like to snap, crackle and pop with this guy! She chuckled, coming down off the
momentary high that often accompanied the sight of a gorgeous hunk of man in
her vicinity. “Welcome to Jolly’s. What can I get you?”
Hope you enjoyed! Please don't forget to stop by and read the other author's participating in this week's HDH here:
http://kerriannecoombes.wordpress.com/hump-day-hook-participant-list/ This is a super talented group and I promise you won't be disappointed in the variety of genres you will get to experience! ;)
Kathleen
18 comments:
Hmm... He sounds hot, and she sounds like she needs some serious lovin'. ;-)
Sounds like an instant match! Love the cereal angle. Good hook.
Yes! He is and she does! Thanks Layna!
Thanks Michelle! But Cupid will have his work cut out for him! That's for sure!
I love the snap, crackle, and pop metaphor! That made me laugh. I would never think of that, lol. Great hook!
Thanks Jade!
Great hook, Kathleen! What a hot encounter. I like the name of the place too.
Thanks Flossie! It's named after my friend Jolly who is a nurse I used to work with! Lol
I loved the lighthearted metaphor. Amusing and hot. Thanks for sharing.
Snap, Crackle and SEX!!!! LOL Great hook x
Love it! Great description, sexy but fun, I'm hooked!
What a sizzlin' hook! And great last line! I may have been in that situation many, many years ago. LOL
WOnderful hook.
Loved the 'snap crackle and pop' comment. LOL. I like the heroine!
Great hook. Love the use of food analogy since she's a waitress. Very fun.
Love it! A great first meeting!
Love the premise of this story! Congrats on your current acceptance. :)
C.R. Moss
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