Tuesday, January 29, 2013

HUMP DAY HOOK ~13

Morning Humpers! I'm back with a paragraph from my free read, Decadent Medicine.  Here a nurse and a doctor have an unintentional meeting at a night club that turns into something more...

“Want to do something a little bit… decadent, Meagan?” he whispered to her, voice full of promise.

Meagan stared into those blue eyes, mesmerized. That was a rhetorical question if she’d ever heard one. But part of her held back. Her more sensible side the one she wanted to tell to shut the fuck up right now side… “I bet you do decadence with all the girls, Dr…ah I mean, James.”


He frowned. “Actually, no.” That deadly smile was back. “Can I let you in on a little secret?”

I hope you enjoyed! The entire free read is available here:
http://afterdarkonlinestories.blogspot.com/2012/11/decadent-medicine-by-kathleen-grieve.html


Catch the other authors participating in Hump Day Hook here:http://humpdayhook.blogspot.co.uk/

Now get humping!!
Kathleen



24 comments:

Layna Pimentel said...

And of course you had to stop there. You're such a tease!

Beth D. Carter said...

Love the greeting...Morning Humpers! Love it! Great read! Thanks!

Jade Crystal said...

Okay, I am as curious as a cat, so it's killing me wondering what the secret is, lol. Great hook!

C. Moss said...

You're such a tease. ;) Good hook. Now I'm wondering what the secret is.
=)
C.

Ciaran Dwynvil said...

Good hook. Now I want to know what the secret is, lol.

kerriannecoombes said...

Oh i bet he just does... LOL

Molly Daniels said...

I'm with the others, wanting to know his secret! Great job!

Adriana said...

definitely hooked - wanna know the secret!

Gem Sivad said...

Hmmm definitely teasing me into wanting more. :D

Michelle Hoefle said...

definitely left me wanting more...what secret? LOL

elingregory said...

Secrets, eh? That'll keep us reading.

Jessica Subject said...

A naughty hook! I want to know his secret! :-)

Christina Cole said...

Secrets are such fun! Great way to hook your readers.

Angelica Dawson said...

Now we all want to know his secret. Great tease

Sarah said...

Oooh, I want to know the secret very much. Wonderful hook.

L VanHorn said...

Great tension, and I'm loving that it ends with the promise of a secret!

C.C. Williams said...

Go decadence, go decadence!

Great hook!

Colette Saucier said...

HA! And they dare call ME a tease! Leaving off with, do you want to know a secret! Mean thing!

Catherine Green said...

Ha ha, that was very cheeky and such a tease!

Sandra Sookoo said...

omg, what's the secret? Loved your hook!

cerianhebert.com said...

Secret? I want to know the secret!

Flossie Benton Rogers said...

I really want to know more about this intriguing man. Nice hook!

Jennifer Simpkins said...

You couldn't just give us that next sentence, could you? What's the secret? And lord, I hope she let's her wild side out.

SherryGLoag said...

Great hook, terrible tease :-)