“Want to do something a little bit… decadent, Meagan?” he whispered to her, voice full of promise.
Meagan stared into those blue eyes, mesmerized. That was a rhetorical question if she’d ever heard one. But part of her held back. Her more sensible side the one she wanted to tell to shut the fuck up right now side… “I bet you do decadence with all the girls, Dr…ah I mean, James.”
He frowned. “Actually, no.” That deadly smile was back. “Can I let you in on a little secret?”
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Kathleen
24 comments:
And of course you had to stop there. You're such a tease!
Love the greeting...Morning Humpers! Love it! Great read! Thanks!
Okay, I am as curious as a cat, so it's killing me wondering what the secret is, lol. Great hook!
You're such a tease. ;) Good hook. Now I'm wondering what the secret is.
=)
C.
Good hook. Now I want to know what the secret is, lol.
Oh i bet he just does... LOL
I'm with the others, wanting to know his secret! Great job!
definitely hooked - wanna know the secret!
Hmmm definitely teasing me into wanting more. :D
definitely left me wanting more...what secret? LOL
Secrets, eh? That'll keep us reading.
A naughty hook! I want to know his secret! :-)
Secrets are such fun! Great way to hook your readers.
Now we all want to know his secret. Great tease
Oooh, I want to know the secret very much. Wonderful hook.
Great tension, and I'm loving that it ends with the promise of a secret!
Go decadence, go decadence!
Great hook!
HA! And they dare call ME a tease! Leaving off with, do you want to know a secret! Mean thing!
Ha ha, that was very cheeky and such a tease!
omg, what's the secret? Loved your hook!
Secret? I want to know the secret!
I really want to know more about this intriguing man. Nice hook!
You couldn't just give us that next sentence, could you? What's the secret? And lord, I hope she let's her wild side out.
Great hook, terrible tease :-)
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