Morning!! Let's see what Roxanne and Jett are doing in my wip, Dating 911...
“I’ve been thinking,” Jett said close to her ear, interrupting her thoughts.
She glanced into the mirror behind the bar, and met his gaze. Amusement danced within, taunting her. She ground her teeth together. His dark head was next to hers as he leaned in close. Heat radiated off his body in waves. Despite the discord that held every muscle taut, tiny flames of desire licked along her skin.
She forced her jaw to relax, trying to squash the sensations rippling up and down her spine. “Well, don’t strain too hard. You’re libel to burst an artery and herniate your brain.”
That's it for now! See you next Sunday! Check out the other Six Sentence authors at http://sixsunday.blogspot.com/
Enjoy the rest of your Sunday!
Kathleen
21 comments:
Oh my... the tension, sexual that is, can be felt- great descriptive Six
I love a sassy leading lady. Nicely done :)
Artery popping = bad!
Really nice tension!
LOL. Love her comment. Great tension.
Wonder how long she'll hold out. :)
lol love it!
Loved this six. dissapointed when it ended! *Clicks fingers* more please!
ha ha! I love her response! That made me chuckle! :)
great end line.
Wonderful sexual tension and love the snappy dialogue!
Wonderful job!
Nice six! Very descriptive.
Nicely done!
Hehehe. Great Six!
Thanks everyone for your kind comments! It's 2:37 am Mountain time and I just got through reading all 60 of SSS posts! Such a talented group!
LOL - thanks for a laugh this Monday morning
Oo, a feisty heroine. Sounds great.
Intense. Love her remark.
fab tension... spicy six!
Alpha males and thinking, never really a girls dream combination! At least not for the girl butting heads with him! LOL
Great last line! Must. Read. More.
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