Sunday, January 23, 2011

SIX SENTENCE SUNDAY POST...

Morning!!  Let's see what Roxanne and Jett are doing in my wip, Dating 911...


I’ve been thinking,” Jett said close to her ear, interrupting her thoughts.



She glanced into the mirror behind the bar, and met his gaze. Amusement danced within, taunting her. She ground her teeth together. His dark head was next to hers as he leaned in close. Heat radiated off his body in waves. Despite the discord that held every muscle taut, tiny flames of desire licked along her skin.


She forced her jaw to relax, trying to squash the sensations rippling up and down her spine. “Well, don’t strain too hard. You’re libel to burst an artery and herniate your brain.”




That's it for now!  See you next Sunday!  Check out the other Six Sentence authors at http://sixsunday.blogspot.com/

Enjoy the rest of your Sunday!
Kathleen

22 comments:

Dawne Prochilo said...

Oh my... the tension, sexual that is, can be felt- great descriptive Six

Ann Mayburn said...

I love a sassy leading lady. Nicely done :)

Krista D. Ball said...

Artery popping = bad!

Lisa Fox said...

Really nice tension!

Dee Carney said...

HAHAHAHAHAHA!!

Eleri Stone said...

LOL. Love her comment. Great tension.

Jessica Subject said...

Wonder how long she'll hold out. :)

Sandra Sookoo said...

lol love it!

Kerrianne Coombes said...

Loved this six. dissapointed when it ended! *Clicks fingers* more please!

Joleene Naylor said...

ha ha! I love her response! That made me chuckle! :)

Arlene said...

great end line.

Trish said...

Wonderful sexual tension and love the snappy dialogue!

Wonderful job!

Alanna Coca said...

Nice six! Very descriptive.

Leigh Ellwood said...

Nicely done!

Eve Cassidy said...

Hehehe. Great Six!

Kathleen Grieve said...

Thanks everyone for your kind comments! It's 2:37 am Mountain time and I just got through reading all 60 of SSS posts! Such a talented group!

Liz said...

LOL - thanks for a laugh this Monday morning

Cate Masters said...

Oo, a feisty heroine. Sounds great.

Hailey Edwards said...

Intense. Love her remark.

Jo-Anne Kenrick said...

fab tension... spicy six!

D. F. Krieger said...

Alpha males and thinking, never really a girls dream combination! At least not for the girl butting heads with him! LOL

Emily Cale said...

Great last line! Must. Read. More.