Thank you to everyone who stops by to read my SIX! I'm having a ball with this. Your comments are encouraging! This set of Six is from my current wip, Dating Impossible...Meet Dr. Cruz Avery, delectable twin brother of firefighter, Jett Avery....
“God damn it!” A female voice exclaimed, stopping Dr. Cruz Avery mid-step. He stood by the partially open door in the back hall of Our Lady Of Sorrow Catholic Church.
Intrigued by a woman who would use the Lord’s name in vain, given her current surroundings, he leaned closer to the crack in the door. And here, Cruz thought, his brother’s wedding would be an occasion he’d have to suffer through. By all indications, things might be on this side of interesting.
There's the tease...we will be seeing more from this hunky ER doctor later... We will get back to Cruz and JJ in upcoming SSS posts... By the time this posts, I will be in bed, sleeping because I work night shifts at the hospital. Can't wait to check out these other Six Sentence Authors for more fun snippets later tonight when I get up! For those of you up, don't wait! Here is the link: www.sixsentence.blogspot.com/
Enjoy your Sunday!
Kathleen
23 comments:
The girl's got spunk! Great six
Very good tease. Fun. xx
absolutely love the end line. Your smooth writing style draws me in, and I must read more.
Yup, it does seem like things are about to get interesting. :) Great six.
I'm certainly interested. Well done!
Oooh. Love hunky docs and hunky firefighters. Liking Dr. Cruz already!
Intriguing set up, thanks for sharing!
Ooooh! I love the name Cruz!
Interesting setup, looking forward to reading more next week
I think that things will be interesting indeed!
Hunky firemen and er docs! What's not to love?
Ha! I like her spunk already!
Great characterization of both here, and in such few words. Excellent job!
I'm w/ Dr. Cruz. Sounds interesting to me too.
Love it when things are just this side of interesting!
Can't wait to see what happens!
I love how you give a taste of each character with this snippet. ^^
LOL. Weddings should never be interesting. (But it's great when they are.)
Sounds like the reception will be a blast! Would love to read more.
Sounds like an interesting ceremony already. Great six! I look forward to reading more.
nice setup.
Thanks to everyone who stopped by and commented! I'm just getting done reading the SSS posts myself. I slept the last couple of days away! Good for the body, but not good when you need to get things done!
"On this side of interesting" made me laugh. Great excerpt.
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